Conversation with a Dark One.
Somebody was talking.
Hey, the voice said. Hey! it said more urgently. I could feel it poking me with what felt like a stick. Get up already! Youre not dead
yet
With that my eyes flew open, and I remembered the fight. Strange dark creatures, not being able to hit them, but they were hurting me; I had tried to run towards NoS, then I was swept up by a large black shadow, then nothing. I was some sort of pitch blackness, but I could still see myself clearly.
See? Knew you were still around. I sat up and turned to the voice. I gasped when I saw that looked like my shadow, if my shadow had green eyes and could talk. But for some reason, it didn't have a tail; maybe it was a real version of me, maybe it was my real shadow? "Man, after being awake for four days, you were hard to find. But, I managed, and here we are...."
Whats going on? What happened?
The shadow shifted its feet and said, You were in a fight, and were being attacked.
Yeah, I remember that much.
Well, when that last one swallowed you up, you were almost a goner.
What do you mean, almost?
See, I managed to save you in the nick of time. That particular little creature wouldve sucked out your soul and then use your body as a vessel for more nasty things. But thats beside the point. What matters now, is that you have a chance to live again, like you never fought at all, good as new, and all that jazz.
Okay, thanks. I stood up and began to walk away. After a few steps, I paused. Ummm
wheres the exit?
The shadow smiled, revealing a large green smile. Thats just the thing. There is no exit.
Then how in the hell can I live again?
Through me.
Well Im sorry, but you dont exactly look like a door or anything, so-
He sighed audibly. You dont get it, do you? I AM THE EXIT. The exit is me.
He was still confusing me. Well then, how do I use you?
Easy. Just grab my hand, and youll be back to normal.
Thats it?
Thats it
Oh! I forgot one little thing.
What?
His smile grew even wider. You have to let me take you over.
My jaw dropped. He continued. You know, I can be a very powerful ally. I can help you focus what skill you have now, and make then even stronger. All that I ask is to reside in your soul until you die. I mean, it's not that hard, really. I could do it right now, but I personally belive in a...sporting chance...
I backed off. NO WAY. NO. UNH-UNH! Theres NO WAY Im gonna let something evil live inside of me! NO WAY. NO CHANCE.
He seemed to shrug it off. Fine then. Suit yourself. You can just sit here and wait to die of starvation in this vast nothingness. Or
That smile was creeping me out. You help me help you.
I thought about it for a few moments. I swear, you better not pull any tricks on me.
He puts his hands up in innocence. Who, me? Naw, I wouldnt dream of it! Besides, I need your body to survive; you have all of your emotions so bottled up, its like having a full course meal. He licked his lips to his own imagination.
I shuddered and held out my hand. Okay. Let me escape from here.
He grabbed my hand forcefully. My names Void.
In that brief moment, I wondered what horror I had truly unleashed upon myself...














Devious Comments
Only thing... It reminded me alot of Ichigo from "Bleach" battle with his inner hollow. I almost half expected it to be him at the end. But still.. really well done!
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Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder
Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
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Did you understand the meaning of his name? I had originally wanted to include his coming back to battle as now VOID-ed, and have him just begg NoS to try and hurt him ;-P oh yeahs, im evil...
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Dare you to unlock the secrets of my mind...
Genius is in the details...and I'm going to live up to that!
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OBJECTION! I defy your logic, and everything it stands for!!!
I did, and that' what I think was the best part of this.. As if he is void and null, his entire life and actions, unimportant and erased.. or did I miss the point entirely?
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Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder
Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
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I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
My Club *Project-Be-Bold Dare to be heard!
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Dare you to unlock the secrets of my mind...
Genius is in the details...and I'm going to live up to that!
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OBJECTION! I defy your logic, and everything it stands for!!!
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Dare you to unlock the secrets of my mind...
Genius is in the details...and I'm going to live up to that!
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OBJECTION! I defy your logic, and everything it stands for!!!
--
Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder
Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
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I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
My Club *Project-Be-Bold Dare to be heard!
--
Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder
Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
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I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
My Club *Project-Be-Bold Dare to be heard!
But actually, (while in this current dark mood) I was actually thinking a little about one of the earleir prose; 89. Through The Fire. Since the situation of a person is the same and all. Also, this...current dark moody evil side of me just BEGGED to be written into the story ;-P
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Dare you to unlock the secrets of my mind...
Genius is in the details...and I'm going to live up to that!
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OBJECTION! I defy your logic, and everything it stands for!!!
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Eyes are in the Beauty of the Beholder
Aang:"You're insane, aren't you?"
Old Woman: "Thaaaat's Right!"
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I'm a member of *AngstyWriters
My Club *Project-Be-Bold Dare to be heard!
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